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TEST  1, WRITING TASK 1

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

 housechold type                       living in poverty Family type

Proportion of people from each

single aged person                                          6%  (54,000)

aged couple                                          7% (211,000)

single, no children                                  19%(359,000)   

couple, no children                               7%(211,000)  

sole parent                                              21%(232,000)

couple with children                                    12%(933,000)

all households                                       11%(1,837,000)

MODEL ANSWER

This model has been prepared by an examiner as an example of a very good answer. However, please note that this is just one example out of many possible approaches.

The table gives a breakdown of the different types of family who were living in poverty in Australia in 1999.

On average, 11% of all households, comprising almost two million people, were in

this position However, those consisting of only one parent or a single adult had

almost double this proportion of poor people, with 21% and 19% respectively.

Couples generally tended to be better off, with lower poverty levels for couples

without children (7%) than those with children (12%). It is noticeable that for both

types of household with children, a higher than average proportion were living in

poverty at this time.

Older people were generally less likely to be poor, though once again the trend

favoured elderly couples (only 4%) rather than single elderly people (6%).

Overall the table suggests that households of single adults and those with children

were more likely to be living in poverty than those consisting of couples.

TEST 1,  WRITING TASK 2

WRITING  TASK  2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as           media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the           most effective.

                 · comics

                 ·books

                 · radio

                 ·television

                 · film

                 · theatre

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

SAMPLE ANSWER

[This is an answer written by a candidate who achieved a Band 4 score. Here is the examiner's comment:

This answer describes some relevant advantages and disadvantages of books, TV and films,although these are sometimes unclear or not sufficiently developed. The script loses marks, however,because it doesn't answer the question about 'which medium is most effective' and also because it isunder the minimum length (only 230 words).

 The writer has tried to organise ideas and uses paragraphing to structure the response. However,the message is confused at times and the answer is incomplete. Some ideas are linked appropriately,but there is a lot of repetition across sentences. The writer uses a limited range of language quite repetitively and there are only simple sentences.However, these are often quite accurate, although there are many examples of basic errors in

grammar and punctuation.]

In our daily life, we always communicate information through the Media,such as television,radio,film. These Media have different advantages and disadvantages for us. Now, I am going to compare the advantages and disadvantages of books,television and film.

  Books bring us different knowledge. It bases on what Book we read.A famous Chinese traditional werse which described books is a treasure.We can find a golden house in there. Moreover,when we want to read it,we can find it easily, such as bookstore, library.We can also learn a lot of words from books.And if can improve our reading and writing skills.

  However, books always are not attractive for children or youngster.It is because books are quite boring.A lot of words and less pictures inside the books,compare to television,television has pictures and sound,we don’t have to read a lot of words in television.But some artist in television programme or film,bring a bad image to us.Then some children or youngers will imitate their behaviour.Some film also bring a wrong message to us,For example,they are always smoking in films.If seems that smoking is good and smart.It caused many youngers imitate them smoking.

  In conclusion,bookds,televison and film have many advantages and disadvantages.I cannot write all in here.And we have choose the media carefully.

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